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Fifty characters could be all that stands between
you and success in your next email campaign.
Fifty characters is all the space you have in a
typical subject line to catch your reader's eye
and entice him to open your email and take the action
you want.
How could something so small make or break an email's
success? Because many recipients use the subject
line to decide whether to open or delete an email.
Subject lines are tricky devils, however. A good
one can get your email opened in a flash, while
a bad one could spell oblivion in the trash or junk
file.
Because so much is riding on your subject line,
we came up with 15 rules for crafting a good one.
Be sure to review them before you send your next
email campaign.
15 Rules to Write the Subject Line Right
Rule 1: Read the newspaper.
If you want to write a better subject line, pick
up your local paper. The headline usually highlights
a story's most important fact in a limited space.
A subject line, in turn, should clearly state what
your reader can expect from your email, what's in
it for them or what you want them to do as a result
of the email. However, there isn't enough space
to do all of them all the time. Look at the newspaper
headline to see how it interplays with the story.
Rule 2: There is no sure-fire formula.
What works in one campaign might bomb with the
next. A discount offer should be worded differently
from an upsell, and both are different from a breaking-news
announcement.
Even if you are sending out emails to promote similar
campaigns, you shouldn't recycle a subject line
from a past campaign. You need to stand out each
time, yet be familiar to the reader, too. How do
you find out what works best? See Rule 3.
Rule 3: Test, test, test.
Test continually to determine trends and styles
that appear to work. Pretest if you can. Add a day
to your campaign-creation schedule to give you enough
time to try out different lines. See Rule 12 for
more on testing.
Rule 4: Support the "from" line.
The "from" line tells the recipient who
sent the email, and the subject line sells the recipient
on opening. If your "from" line lists
your company name, you don't have to repeat it in
the subject line, which frees up space in the subject
line. But do consider branding your subject line
with the name of the newsletter, for example, so
that it will stand out in the junk folder and your
recipients’ overflowing inboxes.
Recent research shows readers often look at the
"From" line first when deciding whether
to open an email and then the subject line. See
the Quick Tip for more information on creating the
right "from" line.
Rule 5: List key info first.
Some email clients allow more characters in a subject
line than others, but most give you at least 50,
including spaces. So, load your key information
in that first 50. Also, make sure the cut-off doesn't
occur in a crucial word, such as a price or date.
Use the EmailLabs subject-line checker see how your
subject line renders in the leading desktop and
Web email clients.
Rule 6: Open rates don't always measure
subject-line success.
Look at the subjects associated with the highest
number of conversions, such as registrations, clicks
to view newsletter articles, sales or downloads.
If you drill down into your Web analytics, you might
find some anomalies, such as an email with a relatively
low open rate but a high sales-per-order rate. That
could mean something in the subject line strongly
appealed to a narrow segment of your list and could
point the way to a more lucrative segmentation.
Remember, your end goal is not necessarily high
open rates, but to have subscribers take a specific
action. Focus on your end goal.
Rule 7: Personalize.
Personalize subject lines based on users' product
or content preferences, interests, past purchases,
Web visits or links clicked. Be careful when personalizing
on past purchases, however, because the purchase
could have been a gift for someone else and might
not relate to your reader's real interests. Always
make it easy for readers to find and update their
data and preferences.
Rule 8: Urgency drives action.
Set a deadline: "Order by midnight tonight;"
"Last day to ensure Xmas delivery." Use
urgency and deadlines as part of a planned series
of emails as well. For example on Monday incorporate
“5 Days Left…” and then on Thursday
follow it with “Only 24 Hours….”.
Rule 9: Watch those spam filters.
There's a fine line between "catchy"
and "spammy." Run your copy through a
content checker to identify any spamlike words,
phrases or construction. The content checker will
tell you which phrases to avoid. Two tricks that
could trip a spam filter: subject lines in all capital
letters, and using more exclamation points than
necessary. (Both look unprofessional, too.) In fact,
we recommend against using exclamation points at
all if you can avoid it.
Rule 10: "Free" is not evil.
Yes, you can use "free" in a subject
line. Just don't make “free” the first
word, use it in conjunction with an exclamation
point or spell it in all caps (could get your email
filtered). People still respond to "free;"
so, the increase in orders or other actions will
almost always outweigh the messages lost from filtering.
Rule 11. Lead, but don't mislead.
Don't stretch the truth in the subject line or
promise more than the email can deliver, or make
grand claims that readers will find hard to comply
with in order to get a special offer or benefit.
Readers will distrust you (and reach for the report-spam
button) if your subject line doesn't reflect the
email content.
Rule 12. Write and test early and often.
Writing the subject line is often the last and
most hurried step in email campaign development.
It should be the other way around. As you plan the
email campaign, start thinking about what will go
into the subject line. That will help you sharpen
your campaign's focus and may even change or tweak
the offer or article focus.
Ideally, you should test subject lines on a segment
of your list, but if you're pressed for time, run
them past an informal focus group including your
marketing team, others in your department and even
folks from outside the department to get a wider
view.
Rule 13. Review subject-line performance
over your last several campaigns or newsletters.
See which subject lines delivered the action you
wanted – the most conversions, the highest
average sale per order, the highest click-through
rate, etc.
Review your Web analytics reports to see which
newsletter article topics draw the most clicks or
forwards, which whitepapers get downloaded most
often, which brands or departments get the most
traffic. This analysis should drive content and
product selection strategies, but it can also show
you what information is most relevant or useful.
At EmailLabs, we reviewed two years of subject
lines and discovered that action-oriented statements
that included numbers and "tips" and similar
phrases pulled the best. For example, the top 3
most popular EmailLabs/Intevation Report articles
from 2005 were "22 Imperatives for Email Marketing
Success," "11 Email Marketing Trends for
2005," "15 Tips for Improved Subject Lines."
Rule 14. Continue the conversation.
Sending email more frequently than monthly or quarterly
helps you create a conversation with your readers.
Your tracking reports should show you what their
crucial or hot-button issues are, what kinds of
topics gets them opening and clicking more vigorously.
Feature those keywords or issues prominently in
the subject line where appropriate -- first or second
position -- to capture readers' attention.
Additionally, if your email frequency permits it,
continue a dialog and content direction you’ve
started in previous emails. For example, “Google
Agrees to China Censorship” followed by “Google
to Testify Before Congress.”
Rule 15. Can you pass the must-open/must-read
test?
The days when people opened absolutely everything
that landed in their inboxes are long gone. Now,
you have to intrigue them. Appeal to their need
for information, to be an insider "in the know."
Go back to Rule 14. If you have created a conversation
with your readers, a reference to it in your subject
will intrigue them into opening your email to see
the next installment.
Run a simple test on yourself and others on your
team – does the subject line pass these two
tests?
1. The must-read test. If a subscriber
doesn’t open the email they will feel like
they are out of the loop and may have missed an
offer that they will regret not taking advantage
of.
2. The unbulk bulk-folder test.
Simply, if for some reason your email goes into
the bulk folder, does the combination of from and
subject line wording inspire trust and intrigue
to get the recipient to move it into their inboxes?
Conclusion: Much to Learn, Much at Stake
Yes, this seems like a lot of fuss over 50 little
characters. But those 50 characters may have the
greatest impact on your email's success. It pays
to get them right.
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